Torn by K.A. Robinson

I received this book for free from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

This book may be unsuitable for people under 17 years of age due to its use of sexual content, drug and alcohol use, and/or violence.
Torn by K.A. RobinsonTorn by K.A. Robinson
Series: Torn #1
Published by Atria Books on May 7th, 2013
Genres: New Adult
Pages: 272
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Chloe hasn't had the best life. With a mother who is gone more often than not, she has had to raise herself. After graduating high school, she leaves to start a new life away at West Virginia University with her best friends Amber and Logan, determined to leave her demons in the past.

On her first day, she meets a stranger who takes her breath away at first sight. Until she met Drake, no one had ever sparked her interest. Now this tattooed and pierced bad boy is all she can think about, no matter how hard she fights it.

Falling for Drake was never part of her plans, but when it happens, things seem to do anything but fall into place.

Dealing with a tragic past, Drake has never cared about anyone else but himself and his band. But when Chloe takes the empty seat next to him in class, things start to change. Instantly drawn to her, he begins to wonder if one girl can take a cold hearted womanizer and change every part of him?

Long hidden feelings are revealed and friendships tested to the brink

reading after dark

 

 

Ah where does one start when it comes to reviewing a book that literally made me want to burn things?

Torn was a story that I had high hopes for because a good friend of mine recommended it. And at first I actually really dug it. Even though the characters had the staple “hard upbringing” back stories, and the typical “bad boy” character, and of course the “I didn’t know you loved me” plot line. I still sort of dug the story and even when things started turning for the worse I still stayed optimistic! I thought “yeah it’s typical NA drama but, they could turn it around! Things could go a different way soon!” So I plowed on, with those thoughts in the back of my mind.Then the cliché’s started, and the best friend became my #1 enemy, and my optimism dropped a notch. Next came the secrets glances, the hidden thoughts, the burying of emotions and my optimism took another blow. But it wasn’t until I hit the 62% mark that my optimism climbed out the window, hijacked a car and drove off a cliff.

I was going to DNF it right there. I didn’t care that I had made it so far, I didn’t care about the fact that I had basically begged for a review copy of Torn, all I could see was the biggest fuck up in the history of fuck ups and I wanted out. I’ve never felt such disdain for a set of characters and I cross my fingers that I never will again. But it wasn’t just the ginormous fuck up, that did it for me. Oh no. My hate had been brewing underneath my optimism since chapter 3. I just didn’t realize until that very moment how hot that hate had become.

I felt hate for Logan, Chloe’s best friend, and the worlds biggest douche bag. He was probably the #2 reason why I felt the need to set fire to many things. I think what pissed me off the most about Logan was his “undying love” for Chloe (that she was oblivious to of course!)and how it was supposed to be this big secret but it was obvious to the readers from day one! I mean if your going to have a “secret crush” somewhere in the book make us work for it! Keep us guessing! It was like Robinson took a blanket threw it over an elephant and said “somewhere in this room there is a large animal”.

Next I felt hate for Chloe, because she was a spineless little shit who couldn’t make up her mind about something that really was pretty simple to figure out.

Finally I felt hate for the “plot”. I didn’t expect it to be this big earth shattering, mind-blowing, life altering story but there was seriously little to no plot! It was more like a day time soap opera where all the characters have “secrets” and look at each with smiles and love but as soon as they turn their back, IN sinks the knife! And just to show you what I mean, here’s a little taste!

 

“If you want me, take me. If this is what it takes for us to get each other out of our systems, then we’ll do it and move on.”

She says that, even though she HAS  a boyfriend. But of course that doesn’t matter! Obviously sex will solve all the worlds problems, and make it totally ok to cheat on someone. That’s not shallow or selfish! Oh no! Not at all selfish! I mean you’re just screwing both of these men who are crazy about you because you don’t want to take a second and work out your feelings. That’s not selfish or shallow or twisted or wrong! But why don’t I let you continue to justify your actions!

He hesitated. “What about Logan?”

I closed my eyes as guilt took over. “I can’t move on with him until I can stop thinking about you. Please Drake. I need this, give it to me.” My lips went to his and I kissed him hungrily.

 

Ummm, so your telling me that the way to get over your feelings for one guy so you can move on to a guy you truly don’t have romantic feelings for, you must have sex with him while you’re technically with the other? Writing that gave me a headache and reading it again gave me a migraine.

 

 

I’ve never rated a book zero stars before, and while I’m sad it ended like that I honestly can not find one redeeming quality within this book. The characters irked me, the “plot” didn’t exist, the writing was ok at best and the complete lack of depth just topped the “I hate you with the red-hot intensity of a thousand suns” pie.

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19 thoughts on “Torn by K.A. Robinson

  1. Lectus

    I was going to ask you why you picked it in the first place but I just saw that it is an ARC. Are you into New Adult? I just hate this new adult/romance thing. It sounds to me that authors just make up something to get two characters together (opposite sexes so far), so they can have sex.

    The most boring thing about this genre? A) “XXXX never intended to fall for XXXX” but she did, b) their lives are never easy – but seem that way, c) is all about sex.

    Actually, is this a new erotica thing sans the BDSM?
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    1. Octavia

      I usually enjoy NA, just because it’s typically a nice fluffy read inbetween books, but this just made me go “erghhgsvdgfhsvd”! And it does get repetitive really fast. I’ve read a few that were either outside the box a bit or inside the box drawing circles….which is loved!

      I don’t know if I’d call it erotica though. There isn’t enough sex and there is usually more plot than that of a erotica novel.
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  2. Leanne @ Literary Excursion

    The absurd thought I had because of this review – well I like all that girl’s gyspy rings, but I can’t steal them because last time I tried to wear rings on every finger they kept clanking together and I felt like my fingers had that padding in between them like when you stuff those foam things between your toes to paint them to keep them from touching (which I don’t do because I would rather sit with my feet placed firmly on the floor and spread eagle my toes for 20 minutes until the polish dries) and it just made my hands feel FAT and I wanted to rip them off and fling them across the room. The rings, not my hands. I wouldn’t want to rip my hands off, because that would be crazy.

    All I can say about the actual review is – this is why I’m scared to read NA books. And I’m so sorry you had to suffer through that garbage. I really wonder how some books make it through publishing.

    P.S. I effing love Castiel.
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    1. Octavia

      Errr umm….Have I told you how much I enjoy your rambles?! And I hate those creepy foam things too!

      NA usually isn’t bad for me. I loved Frigid, and I just finished another one (Rule) and I really liked them! They weren’t life changing or anything but they were light reads that helped get me back into wanting to read. This just sucked eggs!
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  3. Michelle @ In Libris Veritas

    First off, you have expert usage with gifs. Castiel is the best.

    I was so close to requesting this one. Every time I got to Netgalley I want to request it…but I had no clue it had such dense characters. That has to be the dumbest reason I’ve seen to cheat.

    I think I’ll stay away from this one.
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    1. Octavia

      Smart girl! I wish I wouldn’t have requested it or had just been declined but urgh fate is such a cruel mistress!

      (happy you enjoy Castiel)
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  4. Jillyn

    I’ve had a relatively good run with reading NA so far but…. Oh lord, this review. Great review but I’ll definitely think twice before trying to get through this one. It seems like I’m hating more and more female characters lately -__-
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    1. Octavia

      I’ve been loving NA lately! This just destroyed all my optimism though. If you do decide to pick it up good luck and thanks!
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  5. Trish Hannon

    I got turned down for this one! Sounds like I had a lucky escape.

    PS Step away from the matches!
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    1. Octavia

      *shakily puts box of matches down* Yeah lucky you! *stares at matches*
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  6. Hazel

    Thank god, I didn’t request this on Netgalley. Chloe just seems downright hateful. And the having sex to move on from someone you’re still in a relationship with? That is such a stupid excuse. I feel sorry for the time you lost on this. Nonetheless, this has got to be the best-written negative review I’ve ever read. I’m awe-inspired by your hot rage towards this book. (I guess I’m weird like that)
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    1. Octavia

      Ah well at least my rage was sort of a positive for you! And yes, Chloe was horrible!

      Thank you a million times for the compliment!
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  7. Angie

    I appreciate this review. It will stop me from picking this book up ever, and I was very tempted to because I am a shallow person and I like the cover. Sounds utterly horrible. It makes me sad. There are so many good NA books out there, but there are so many like this that give the whole genre a bad name.

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    1. Octavia

      The cover is sooo pretty! And that doens’t make you a bad person! I judge books by their covers ALL THE TIME! 😉
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  8. Samantha @ Reading-AndCoffee

    I haven’t posted my review for this one yet, but I think you summed it up pretty nicely. I had such high hopes for Chloe and her edgy-ness, but WTF happened?! First of all, how can someone be so oblivious? Second, who the f**k does she think she is? Third, nothing lined up with her. Her character was literally all over the place. As far as Drake and Logan go, I don’t know which one I disliked more, but there were some serious issues with them too. And it’s not just a matter of a poorly written characters. The plot has so many flaws and holes. I have the second book here too and I honestly don’t know what to do with it…

    On a positive note, I do really like the cover?
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    1. Octavia

      If you get to the second book hats off to you! I barely (by the skin of my teeth!) made it through this piece of awfulness, I won’t torture myself again!

      The cover is pretty right?! 😉
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  9. tonyalee

    Welp. I had this whole comment typed up and geared to go, but I it seems like I can’t say what I want without SOUNDING snarky. Which, is not my intention. SO.

    I will just agree to disagree. Sucks you didn’t like it! I was laughing at your review (in a good way) You’re hilarious. 😀

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    1. Octavia

      WHAT?!? I was totally awaiting your snark! 😉

      I know you liked it, so I figured there’d be some varying opinions. And I’m all about a good debate! No censoring next time missy. I’m a big girl lol.

      (Happy to entertain!)
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